This week I did not have a lot of time to accomplish what I viewed in the Language Learning Plan, because I was busy in the completion of some other business. But I attempted to devote some time, and at this time I focus on writing part in my Language Learning Plan. In this part I need to work a lot especially in summarize tasks and conclusion.
First of all, my problem was I did not know how I can make a good summary and what a specification that makes it good is. Also, what is the method that makes a good summary? I thought a good summary must contain my opinion on it. But explain to me that I cannot, I would add my opinion on the summary. This is what I understood from this websites http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20090130223125AAkBeL0.At first, you must express the sense of the original using your own words and structures. Next, you should not give your own ideas or criticisms as part of the summary. In addition, a good summary should not include selected examples, details, or information which is not relevant to the piece of writing taken as a whole. Finally, a good summary should probably include the main idea of each paragraph, and the main evidence supporting that idea. I tried it grabbed what I understood from this site on some articles in newspapers and on some lessons. And I felt I got some improvement and I will continue to get a good summary contains all the core ideas of a good summary.
The second problem was how I can make good conclusion. At first when you wrote the conclusion I could not write more than two lines. But this site explained to me that conclusion has two parts. First part must include the summary statement is one or two sentences which restate the thesis in a fresh way to reinforce the essay's main idea. The second part should include the clincher is a final thought which should create a lasting impression on the reader http://home.earthlink.net/~khatzi/essay/concl.htm. After I read this site got a lot of development in the conclusion, because I applied what I learned on this site that I have some scripts and I re-write again and I noticed that I can add more good ideas.
Obviously, what I learned from those two sites helped me a lot to solve these two problems. The first sites taught me how I can make a good summary, and I second site taught me how I can make a good conclusion. I used these two sites because the sites that I wrote in my LLP did not work because of this I change them. Also, I will work more to develop me summary and conclusion.
I like this. You have put a lot of thought into how the sites and your process worked. However, I see a lot of mistakes in grammar; make sure you take the time to proofread, and/or have someone else look over your entries before you post. – Julie
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